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Author's Name: veiledndarkness
Story Title: Pretending
Rating: PG
Warnings:Some barely hinted at slash, but it's a blink and miss kind of thing.
Summary: What is normal anyway?
Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit was made from this.



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Everyone, just... pretend to be normal.


Normal? The very idea is foreign to Dwayne. What is normal anyway? Who defines it?

They've never been normal, none of them, he knows that now. He's no exception either.

Would it really be that much better if they were different, if they pretended?

The way Richard says that, 'pretend'; that's what makes Dwayne's skin crawl. Pretend.


Pretend that he doesn't see the way Richard's lip curls when he looks at them.

Pretend that he doesn't hear his mother's muted tears when she thinks she's alone.

Pretend that he doesn't feel the weight of Frank's too sharp eyes, peeling away his layers.


Why should they be anything but what they are? Who gives a shit if they aren't 'normal'? If they're abnormal, then so be it.

Dwayne settles back in the van, his eyes drifting once more to Frank's, a silent scrutiny.

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Date: 2007-07-10 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fakebody.livejournal.com
Wow, this was very powerful.
I loved every word.
The descriptions for pretend were spot on.

This caught the dysfunctionality perfectly.
Great job!

Date: 2007-07-10 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veiledndarkness.livejournal.com
Thank you! Aww* making me blush here.

Glad you liked it.

Date: 2007-07-10 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fakebody.livejournal.com
No problem babydoll ;]

Date: 2007-07-10 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] niprhidel.livejournal.com
Totally got into Dwayne's head - everytime you do one of these it makes me think about that other story I was starting...*shakes fist at you - lol*

Very good - wonderful flow of words.

Date: 2007-07-26 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-lady-revan.livejournal.com
Everyone, just... pretend to be normal.
They totally stole that from me and BF, we used to "whisper" Quick! Pretend your normal whenever someone would come into whatever room we were goofing off in, lol.

That was a great piece.
That movie was funny but, sad at the same time.

Date: 2007-07-26 10:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veiledndarkness.livejournal.com
That line always bothered me from the movie. The way Richard says it, likes there something bad about the way they are.

And thanks! Glad you liked it.

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