Four Brothers

[veiledndarkness]

Title: Silenced

Author: veiledndarkness

Pairing: Implied Bobby/Jack

Rating: PG

Summary: Say it….

Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit made and no harm intended.

For the prompt Whisper at fourbrothers100



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Say it…

Tell me you love me.

I’d say it, if I could speak over my pounding heart, over the deafening silence between us.

I’d tell you, if only to see that look in your eyes, see the love you don’t admit to.

I can count on one hand how many times you’ve said it.

And all of those times; it was never the way I need to hear it.

And I’m greedy like that. I need more than chaste kisses and brotherly hugs.

I need you so much more than you know.

Say it; whisper it, just once, Bobby.

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Comments

[sinarie.livejournal.com]

Aww. This was kind of angsty. Which, to clarify, is a good thing. :D (Although I do love fluff, as well. I'll take Bobby/Jack in any form I can get it.)

This line in particular was made of awesomeness (along with the rest of the piece, of course, but I felt like singling this out): 'And I’m greedy like that.' Loved it!

[veiledndarkness.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Glad you liked it :)

[coldconcrete.livejournal.com]

Absolutely beautiful.
Hun, you are amazing.

[veiledndarkness.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

[anaveragenessi.livejournal.com]

I only recently joined in this community and have been reading a lot of stuff posted here. I can say that this, much lick all else you have posted here, has was awesome. I could almost hear Jack's voice narrating. You totally rock.

[veiledndarkness.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this.

[rome102.livejournal.com]

WoW ^^ Definately a favourite.

You know when Im reading Im always looking for your stories. Dont know why but when I have two stories in front of me I choose yours. I guess I just love how you write.

[(Anonymous)]

This feels exactly like a poem written in Jack's journal. Spot on.

[veiledndarkness.livejournal.com]

Thank you :)