Four Brothers

[veiledndarkness]

Title: A Kiss is Never Just a Kiss.

Author: veiledndarkness

Pairing: Bobby/Jack

Word Count: 100

Summary: He could spend forever kissing him.

Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit made and no harm intended.

For the prompt Mouth at fourbrothers100



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Slick, wet, heated kisses.

Fast and hard, against the wall.

With one hand fisted in his hair.

He could spend hours just kissing him.

Kiss him until his lips are pink and swollen.

His face flushed, eyes dark with desire.

Again and again, until he's moaning.

Rocking up against him, achingly hard.

He loves to tease him, leave him hanging on the edge.

Mouth open, panting and moaning his name like a prayer.

The perfect image of debauchery, of sinful lust.

Trace his lips, listen to him plead.

God, he begs so prettily.


Yeah, he could do this forever.

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Comments

[sinarie.livejournal.com]

God, the images this invokes... Loved it. Seriously. Awesome word choices, they set a mood that goes so much farther beyond what's shown here. The only thing I didn't like about it was that it should be longer. Lots and lots longer. Like, I'm thinking extremely long. 1000s of words. Yeah, totally. Okay, I'll stop now.

Seriously, though, this was awesome. Looking forward to more from you! You write such amazing Bobby/Jack.

[veiledndarkness.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Lol, it's ok. I love doing drabbles. The challenge to fit a story into 100 words.

I'm glad you liked it :)

[coldconcrete.livejournal.com]

Amazing Hun, absolutely amazing. I'd say more, but my brain might have oozed out my ears.

[veiledndarkness.livejournal.com]

Lol, aw thanks! Glad you liked it :)

[anaveragenessi.livejournal.com]

Now that is some hot imagery.

[veiledndarkness.livejournal.com]

Lol, thank you! Glad you liked it :)

[shadow1290.livejournal.com]

me likes!

~shadow

[veiledndarkness.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[littlewitch34.livejournal.com]

Your word choice is pretty amazing (it is, in your stories and when we write together, too!) and your skill at 100-word drabbles astounds me.

[veiledndarkness.livejournal.com]

Why thank you :)

I love doing drabbles. It's a challenge I can't resist.

[rome102.livejournal.com]

Great :D

[(Anonymous)]

Hot!

[veiledndarkness.livejournal.com]

Thanks :)