veiledndarkness: (Bobby & Jack Love)
veiledndarkness ([personal profile] veiledndarkness) wrote2009-03-23 08:20 pm
Entry tags:

Four Brothers

Title: A Kiss is Never Just a Kiss.

Author: veiledndarkness

Pairing: Bobby/Jack

Word Count: 100

Summary: He could spend forever kissing him.

Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit made and no harm intended.

For the prompt Mouth at [livejournal.com profile] fourbrothers100



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Slick, wet, heated kisses.

Fast and hard, against the wall.

With one hand fisted in his hair.

He could spend hours just kissing him.

Kiss him until his lips are pink and swollen.

His face flushed, eyes dark with desire.

Again and again, until he's moaning.

Rocking up against him, achingly hard.

He loves to tease him, leave him hanging on the edge.

Mouth open, panting and moaning his name like a prayer.

The perfect image of debauchery, of sinful lust.

Trace his lips, listen to him plead.

God, he begs so prettily.


Yeah, he could do this forever.

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[identity profile] sinarie.livejournal.com 2009-03-24 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
God, the images this invokes... Loved it. Seriously. Awesome word choices, they set a mood that goes so much farther beyond what's shown here. The only thing I didn't like about it was that it should be longer. Lots and lots longer. Like, I'm thinking extremely long. 1000s of words. Yeah, totally. Okay, I'll stop now.

Seriously, though, this was awesome. Looking forward to more from you! You write such amazing Bobby/Jack.

[identity profile] veiledndarkness.livejournal.com 2009-03-27 01:39 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Lol, it's ok. I love doing drabbles. The challenge to fit a story into 100 words.

I'm glad you liked it :)